Strings of Fate Reviews
Ruby
I love the story plot and I love how the book is going so far! I have found a couple grammatical errors, but I understand, because I have also gone back into the few short stories I have written, and have revised them so much that they are better than when I first wrote them. The only problem I have is having to pay for chapters. I am fine with watching ads so far, but as a reader, this book interested me so much that I wanted to read it to the end in one day. It is not often I find a good book that I never want to stop reading. My plans to pull an all nighter were foiled when I realized I had to pay coins for chapters. I just broke my habit of multi-reading (multitask reading where you read multiple books at the same time) and sadly I have started doing it again because I have to wait to get more coins, or wait for ads to refill before continuing the book. I am broke, have no job, living with my parents, and going to my first year of college. Keep writing, because one day (if you haven’t already) you will get a great editor, and your stories will be known. Considering I normally don’t read romance, this is great for you. You have an amazing hook and are on a great path to success! From a book lover to another, the best thing you can do is put an amazing hook to lure in your audience, and every now and then placing smaller hooks in chapters to keep that audience enthralled in your wonderfully written work. -Sincerely (Alias) Ruby P.S would write more, but there is a word limit of 300.
August 23, 2025marsha
Enjoy reading this book since it actually has a story with good characters. Has you rooting for all to find their mates. It has an underlying sexual tension which just keeps you interested in how all will finally end. I don’t usually share thoughts/impressions while I’m reading a book but thought I’d give it a try. I’m in need of getting back to reading so I’m filling in chatter so i can reach 80 words.
May 7, 2026Evie
This is a nice change for once... What a strange but interesting world they live in! I'm compelled by the story 's strong characters and peculiar abilities... I like it a lot! Well written, it has a nice flow to it. I especially love how the main character is building up the confidence. I am quite sure there is still more to discover about herself and she does not even understand half of the power she possesses. I'm confident there is still more to know and I'm curious what it's going to be!
April 3, 2026Fira Ashwin
Love the world building and the unique oracle powers. I also find the dilemma of Ryann and Bellamy's relationship refreshing, it wasn't just "oooh he is dark brooding and handsome take me now" the author puts actual thought in fighting between following fate and finally finding a comfort no amount of pillows and blankets can fill and not jumping head first relying solely on fate to grow a relationship between herself, Ryann, and Bellamy. It is also really interesting to see how much detail the author has put into shifter society with unspoken rules needing to be explained everyday concepts generally accepted by shifters that feel foreign and suffocating to Ryann and how she is learns to adapt and accept them thinking of her fate with Bellamy.
March 24, 2026Sarah
Woooooow, Just woow woow. This work is captivating from beginning to the end. Couldn't wait to read the next chapter every time. Love each character and the idea of reading from their pov, the mis understandings among the couples put me on my toes as well. Constantly telling myself it's a book and i can't possibly go inside it to correct the misconception 😄😅 so so epic👌👌.Well done to the writer Great plot as well. Going to look for the author's other works to read.
November 12, 2025Angela Wallace
I loved this novel, this had the right mix of suspense, romance light comedy and action. I due almost wish there was said on Belmays POV and that there was a POV for Darrien. As well as a short POV of Tristians mother and mate. I hope their is a part 2 after Ryann and Belmay have married and if they have any kids of their own what their magics would be. As well as how Kiara and Logans. relationship develops as they get older.
September 2, 2025Cat Noir
Love the storyline. Male counterparts that are upfront about their feelings are the best stories! I hope they work out! The chapters are too short but because the story is so interesting, it's worth the wait! I cannot wait to see the culmination of their love story ♥️ 😍 the only thing I don't appreciate is that the female is a qualified pastry chef but never uses her skills because the writer wants to develop their relationship. Even the male as CEO is never at work.
August 12, 2025Oba
I was hooked from the beginning ! I was impressed by the creative story. The concept was something new and fresh. The author paints vivid pictures of some of the most memorable scenes that gave me all the feels ; ex: “unicorn pajamas and fuzzy slippers and when she follows the red string all the way to the cemetery and down into the ground” I haven’t finished the book yet, but I am excited to see how it ends, well actually I am enjoying the characters journey together and I don’t want it to end. I recommended this book to my friends !
July 24, 2025Erin
I really love this story! I can't stop reading. I just want to know what happens next! The characters and storyline are so compelling. This is a totally unique take on the magical being genre. I am enjoying the twist of Ryann knowing who she belongs with but her reluctance to tell him so things will progress naturally between them. I also like how she is learning about the shifter culture so she can better understand Bellamy.
June 28, 2025Teresa
I love the different species of Shifters. Ryann's magic gift is one I've never heard of before this story. This author does a great job helping us to understand Ryann's confusion when a lot of connected people are around her. I like how all of the people are not two dimensional, but are fully rounded out characters; even Tristan's as yet unnamed, fated mate. These are completely believable characters, so I have to wonder who the author based them on. I also wonder: is it Shifter Canon that shifters don't have pets? Their alter ego animals are not pets.
May 7, 2026