A Succubus For The Kings Reviews

I love it! What's the name of the second part? It does stop on a cliff hanger. I love the characters! I hope he can get pregnant. When is the second part coming out? This is well written 👏 great character development 👏 and tons of sexy scenes! I wish the whole story was here instead of having to search for part 2. 😕 There should be more reversed harem stories with an incubus as the mc because it makes sense.

I like the POV, however, the lack of proofreading leaves a lot to be desired. It d[east take away from the story. Things like "leaving" instead of "living", the reader has to correct in their heads. Hopefully the next book has more explanations about how the MC became an Incubus. The relationship between Grog and the MC, if it survives his sudden rise of status. Do Incubi give birth? Or is the MC changing to a Succubus, like the title suggests?

Loved seeing how he got all the kings and the varying ways they treat him differently but also the same. It's also interesting to see how long it took them to realize what he is though I do want to know how a vampire and werewolf made an incubus it's still interesting to say the least. Without reading the next one I'm gonna guess he's pregnant but it would also be interesting if he's 'evolving' into something more powerful. Can't wait

T h a t w a s a n i c e a n d f u n n y s t o r y. W r i t i n g f o r b o n u s p o i n t s. H a t e w r i t i n g n o n e s e n s. B u t I l i k e P a l t

It was beautifully written and I liked the slight character development each of the kings went through. I can not wait to read the next book and I recommend this one to whomever is in for the ride. There were a few things that did not add up. For instance, Moon quickly forgot that I forgot his name already, was Palt’s brother. After learning this the first time he was okay with their relationship but he quickly grew jealous like the other kings. Still this was a wonderful read.

The perfect blend of sugar and Spice with enough plot that it doesnt get boring but still the occasional spicy scène. But why in a forest (dirt can get in uncomfortable places). The selection reminded me of the hunger games, just less deadly and with a lot more spice. But overall still a good read. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . (Ignore the points (just ding it to fill characters)

I loved this book and am ready for the next part.. although it felt a little rushed at the end.. it went from no one knowing about his relationship with the kings to everyone knowing and the parents moving closer to his brother having a relationship with a dragon guard all in one or two paragraphs.. and there was no explanation as to why the mood swings. Hopefully we will find out in the next book. But this is a good book

Love it! Please keep writing. The characters are well defined and memorable, and each relationship dynamic feels distinct instead of repetitive, which is impressive with such a large cast. The mythology is a fantastic blend of fantasy lore and romantic ideas, and I especially enjoy the mix of species and personalities among the kings. Palt is charming and entertaining to follow, and the emotional tension keeps the story addictive. The grammar is a touch shaky in places, but honestly I am willing to overlook it because the story itself is fun, creative, and hard to stop reading. I am excited to see what happens next.

It was really good 💯😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊💯😊😊💯😊😊💯😊😊💯😊😊💯💯 and I hope you enjoy the rest of the book like I can't wait for part 2 so girl like hurry up and continue the book cause I am eager to know more about the book like wat if his pregnant cause they can be so happy to know that they are going to be father's it's gonna be the best book you have writing so please hurry up and continue writing this nice books that have good spice

I really enjoyed the spice 🌶🌶🌶🌶 🌶 and the banter and playfulness between love interests was fab. Palt's friendship with Grog was lovely, having supportive friends is awesome. I'm looking forward to the next book, hopefully everyone is okay and relationships aren't damaged. I'll be looking out for more books like this one. Palt was very cute and fun loving even after a tough start in life. I'm hoping for little ones in the next book I need a happy ending!