Demons bride Reviews

Is there a part 2. How do you end the story like this. Although I kind of figured she was pregnant when the mood started to change, she was spassing out on everybody. I don't like the ideal of two brothers loving the same woman but I. The same sense aren't they all like half siblings considering their dad possessed her biological dad, then raped her mother. I like the fact that the chapters in this book are actually chapter and not 2 paragraphs making it 1025 chapters for one book. I need part 2 asap

It definitely pulled me in right away. I really enjoyed the storyi like the way it ended. I really think it could have gone on longer it almost feels like you have to on the story or took the first opportunity to end it. Again, not complaining about the story it was a very good story I just feel as though it ended before I was ready I guess it's the real problem. I wish the book was longer. Thank you for the story.

This book was... Interesting. It took a little for me to get into it but I definitely liked it. However, the grammatical errors were way too much. They made it difficult to get through some of the chapters, especially towards the end. But it was doable. Spelling, spacing, punctuation, vocabulary. This could be a great book if it was edited properly. The back and forth of the POV was a lot to keep up with as well. I hope this doesn't come across as mean, I'm just trying to give some constructive criticism because I really did enjoy the book! It just need a bit of editing.

I liked the story so much until right until Gaf, Asmodeuses brother came into the story. Like wtf? Who writes something like that and who likes stories like that? Yes, I've read it whole story but I didn't like the part where Gaf joins in their marridge. In the end he got her pregnant. Really wtf? Right until very end I cheered for Vienna and Asmodeus to be together and to be happy but Gaf joined them and it was so wrong. I've found information that there will be another book with the baby but I wont be reading it. Sorry but I didn't like it at all.

This was a good read! Got a little repetitive and some parts seem like they could have more details, like with Vienna’s past/ background/ lineage - seems like there is a lot more to her that was not explained or that could be expanded on. I was able to read it over the course of a few days. Would love to read more about the ending and where their lives end up following a rather big cliff hanger. The story currently feels a bit unfinished with the way things left off. Overall, kept me reading until the end!

The quick relationship that forms and changes through out the story with a few surprises and a little spice create a story you can't put down . Vienna at 18 is forced into a marriage with a demon , falls in love with 2 secrets are discovered relationships change characters develop and grow new bonds are formed passions are embraced . Over all a great read and im looking forward to the next book . The cliffhanger has me hooked!

Shit I couldn't hold in my squeal in the end. It was perfect . Although I still feel weird that she married both of them. I thought she would choose asmodeus overall. Guess I was wrong. Girl needs both of them to survive. Shit she's pregnant and it's obviously Gafs baby. How will Asmodeus handle this . If I'm being honest. I love Asmodeus more. Gag is great and he is perfect coz he knows her of by heart. But Asmodeus. I don't know. He seems more perfect. Overall the book was great. Please continue it. I wanna see the baby

This novel is an engaging blend of emotion, depth, and storytelling finesse. The author skillfully weaves together relatable characters, vivid imagery, and a plot that keeps readers invested from start to finish. The narrative flows smoothly, balancing introspection with action, and the dialogues feel authentic and impactful. Themes of love, loss, and self-discovery resonate deeply, leaving a lasting impression. Though certain sections could be tighter, the overall execution is compelling and thought-provoking. It’s a captivating read that connects heart and mind, making it a memorable addition to contemporary literature.

Loved the story, loved loved loved the beginning about asmodeous and Vienna, not so much about the ending though. Should be stay strong the connection with asmodeous instead of gaf. And the ring, there is no explanation how Regina can removed asmodeous ring from Vienna finger. I want to know how… lol… well overall it’s a good story. Should be asmodeous baby hahaha… I’m team asmodeous. The changed of his character after rescue is too much. 🙈 thank you.

I was hooked on ' Demon's Bride ' and everything contained within it's pages! It has a great storyline with complex characters, and some steamy scenes to boot 😉 The author did a great job with the way their writing illicited emotions - - it was as though I was inside the book right alongside of the characters. An immersive experience to be sure! I can hardly wait to read the next one!!