His Tamed Wife, The Wild Heiress Reviews

Interesting story, so many secrets. The twists and the turns makes me want to see who she will really end up with Damien or Kieran? The mystery is getting deeper and deeper and she looks like a tough cookie to break. With all the support and the money , if I was her, would leave Damien and use my resources to find out who my savior was, after all that is definitely something money came buy, why suffer? I guess , we do need a story after all :=)

Started off great, ending is not finished even though the book is marked finished. Ages are off in the book, which is a bit annoying, but other than that, the book is fairly well written. Great character development and their views. It's taking a bit long to get to the ending, but I still can't seem to stop reading which is always a good sign. I'm addicted. I may change my review to a better one once it's completely finished.

The story takes to long to evolve. There are discrepancies with the story. One minute she’s operating two phones and the next it’s just the one, she carelessly leaves out for her husband to see her family messaging her. Then there is her back story … one minute she’s an orphan as her backstory with her husband and then all of a sudden she has a family he accepts without question when she takes a call from her sister… it would be good if the discrepancies weren’t there.