Alpha Damon Reviews

Great! Just can't wait for continuing of story!!!! Will there be a second book? If there already is one. What's the title? I was pulled in from the beginning and with all the twists it is hard to see where the story line is going. Will it be Sienna dad that comes from the afterlife to restore piece? Or he vanquish the evil? 🤩 or will the 3 semi sisters be the catalyst needed? 🥰 🤔

Sometimes the text is difficult to read because of too many errors, wrong or missed words. Sometimes whole sentences really do not make sense for me. So it's challenging, especially for me beeing not a native speaker ;-) Maybe a little editing would help? But, you know, once you've started, you want to know how it is going on... And I keep wondering how old the male lead is, because most of the time his acting is annoying, just like a spoiled brat who does't know what he wants. I just hope, he grows up as the book progresses. Don't loose hope! 👍

The writing could have been a little bit better but the storyline is very interesting. I do appreciate that the story does not drag out too much, but the writer gets to the point. I also feel that 80 words in the comments section is a bit much, but getting free points to continue reading the story for the free points is worth it. Which system sucks a little bit. Hopefully I can find another store that keeps my interest.

A good story & a great storyline...that ends WITHOUT BEING FINISHED. Marissa/Tatiana brought back from the grave to seek revenge for her MURDERED DAUGHTERS that AREN'T DEAD but the story cuts off BEFORE she finds out that they are ALIVE? Risen from the dead, she can't FEEL anything yet gets PREGNANT? Majorly DISAPPOINTING end after so much time spent reading. Irritating that after over a week reading 224 chapters I am left with an INCOMPLETE STORYas if the author decided to just walk away from it.

I’m really enjoying the writing of this novel so far, and I’m genuinely hopeful that the story continues to develop in a satisfying way. I’ve read a few other novels on this platform that started out with a lot of potential, only to end with unfinished storylines, unanswered questions, and so much left unexplored. I’m hoping this one will be different and that the author takes the time to properly develop and conclude the various plot points. I’ll definitely keep reading for now and see how it goes, but if the ending is lackluster or incomplete like some of the others I’ve finished, this may unfortunately be my last read on the platform.

I started reading this because of an ad that used to come up when I was playing a game, although the story is not an exact match to the one that I started it is still quite enjoyable. There seems to be a number of grammatical errors and as a teacher this is something that sometimes bothers me. But overall, the story concept is a good one and the writing isn’t terrible. I look forward to finishing and seeing what else the author has to offer.

Love that Sienna is a strong woman - mentally and now also physically. Love women power theme in stories. The emotions described in the story are so true especially the part of being a mother. How motherhood changes a woman’s perception and belief. The story has a good flow - not like the other one I started reading where there seems to be 2 stories in one, and the earlier one becomes totally irrelevant and unrelated. Looking forward to a beautiful ending to this story! ❤️❤️❤️

It is captivating I just I wish I could read it faster but I refuse to pay money. There is a reason books should be available; they provide the outlet some need to escape for a while. I love reading and this novel has a strong storyline but it feels like it progresses at a snail’s pace because I will only read with the coins gifted. How may times will it take for Damon to realize he loves Sienna?

Can’t wait to read the following chapters. This book is keeping me in suspense. What is going to happen next, will they survive. Will Ethan and Delilah get together again? She deserves happiness after everything she has been through. What about Lysandra? Is she going to be okay? I hope she recovers and finds her true mate. She deserves to find happiness with her true mate. I hope they get Justice for all who died. Tatiana is scary. I hope she realises that she was also lied to about her daughters

Loving the novels thus far, but some needs improving on spelling mistakes and grammer. When it comes to updating on unfinished novels, I think the process needs to be faster or it shouldnt be uploaded until a novel is completed otherwise it leaves the reader frustrated waiting weeks for the unfinished ending etc All in all its a hit and miss. On a negative, it can get pretty expensive as I find the chapters pretty small and the coins expensive per chapter.