Alpha Nicholas Reviews

I’m so engrossed in this story, I’ve not been able to put it down! I so want a happy ending! Love how Nicholas is becoming more attracted to Bonnie’s heart.Her and him so deserves love and happiness. There’s a twist coming from somewhere I’m sure. Why is Will so down? How did Rowan meet up with Lola? Why do they blame Bonnie for her mother’s death when she had already died before she was removed from the womb? So many unanswered questions!! I have to keep reading all night!

Started off great but the end was rushed. Too many questions left unanswered and it jumped around way too much. The ending had no precise plot and could’ve went off with a few more chapters. Book was a 3 out of 5 star only because of the good beginning and the bad ending. Definitely should either continue the series or continue the first book. Be aware that you will be left extremely confused by the end of the book.

The story is good, however I was very disappointed by the number of grammatical errors and seriously bad spelling mistakes throughout this novel. Yes I enjoyed the book, the Alpha meeting his Luna, has a twist on it that I was not expecting which kept me hooked, the family dynamics had me turning the page wanting to know what was going to happen next. I did like this novel but this book really does need proof reading there were just too many errors

So far I enjoy reading this book. The plots are very interesting and each character really stands out. At first I was really puzzled about a 28 year old having a 26 year old child but as the plot unfolded i understand. I am hoping Bonnie’s dad and twin sister will get a proper ass whipping soon. The brother is really pathetic and the dad really stupid so I am hoping their pay back for all the evil deeds they subjected Bonnie to will be soon. I also hope the sister will find her mate who will beat the living crap out of her. She will experience all the abuse she subjected her sister to. A good and proper karma for all three of them where they wish death to come.

Alpha Nicholas is a fun story so far. Plenty of great stories and changes. The primary characters are so far well developed. Characters that you can relate to and understand. Horrible characters as well that are not redeemable and only get worse. Also good families and better friends. Plot twists that are not completely predictable. Although you want some to happen to the bad characters (of course bad stuff). Looking forward to continuing the story and plot development! Keep it up

I am disappointed that there are numerous spelling and grammar errors. I am enjoying the book but really wish they could be corrected. There are also a lot of word usage errors in the book. The story line is moving along fine but has dragged on at times. There have been some confusing parts that do not follow correctly from what was previously written. It is important to make sure that everything follows throughout the story. I look forward to reading more of this story.

What a nice read! I really enjoyed reading this story very much. Only thing I don’t like, as with most of the stories I have read, is that the main character is usually emotionally and many times, physically abused. Aside from this I enjoyed reading this book and recommend it very much to all to read. I state that you will not regret reading this book. Thanks to the author and the wishing you luck in your future books to come!

It's a page turner! The story is compelling, and I'm enjoying it very much. I don't usually pay for coins, but I got some so I could read it faster! With that said, the grammar and spelling are not very good, and you can tell that the author may not fully understand the English language. But it doesn't take away from the story. The characters are consistent, and so is the story. I'm greatly enjoying it so far and looking forward to see how it all unfolds.

This was a great book. I couldn’t put it down!! The characters were amazing and the storylines, fantastic. I loved getting to know all the characters and having kick ass female characters made this book engaging and an easy read. I know that I will be reading this book again because it is such a great story. Alpha Nicholas and Bonnie had a tough road to navigate and watching them go through the trials and tribulations and come out on the other side victorious was Amazing. Thank you for this wonderful book

Well this book started off exciting and intriguing even though it had lots of grammar errors and spelling mistakes and I mean lots, it still was ok though it did lose it way and was a little all over the place and had one drama after another without any conclusion to the story and the book was very confusing characters names kept changing so you were left deciphering what was intended and the ending so rushed and story lines were unfinished. Disappointing.