Alpha Nicholas Reviews

I’m so engrossed in this story, I’ve not been able to put it down! I so want a happy ending! Love how Nicholas is becoming more attracted to Bonnie’s heart.Her and him so deserves love and happiness. There’s a twist coming from somewhere I’m sure. Why is Will so down? How did Rowan meet up with Lola? Why do they blame Bonnie for her mother’s death when she had already died before she was removed from the womb? So many unanswered questions!! I have to keep reading all night!

Started off great but the end was rushed. Too many questions left unanswered and it jumped around way too much. The ending had no precise plot and could’ve went off with a few more chapters. Book was a 3 out of 5 star only because of the good beginning and the bad ending. Definitely should either continue the series or continue the first book. Be aware that you will be left extremely confused by the end of the book.

The story is good, however I was very disappointed by the number of grammatical errors and seriously bad spelling mistakes throughout this novel. Yes I enjoyed the book, the Alpha meeting his Luna, has a twist on it that I was not expecting which kept me hooked, the family dynamics had me turning the page wanting to know what was going to happen next. I did like this novel but this book really does need proof reading there were just too many errors

So far I enjoy reading this book. The plots are very interesting and each character really stands out. At first I was really puzzled about a 28 year old having a 26 year old child but as the plot unfolded i understand. I am hoping Bonnie’s dad and twin sister will get a proper ass whipping soon. The brother is really pathetic and the dad really stupid so I am hoping their pay back for all the evil deeds they subjected Bonnie to will be soon. I also hope the sister will find her mate who will beat the living crap out of her. She will experience all the abuse she subjected her sister to. A good and proper karma for all three of them where they wish death to come.

So far its a good story behind it. It could use a bit of spell check and punctuation check im places. And the author would draw more people in if they had a little bit more detail l. Also it jumps around a bit. Like her bother is there with the rogue, but what happened to her dad and sister that are still supposed to be staying in the pack. And her brother was supposed to have went back to his pack. Would have been nice to put it in the b4 that part that he actually didn't go back.

I enjoyed the whole story and the felt it was better by including the lives of other close characters as well as the main two, whom I really liked as it showed strength and vulnerability in both of them plus I always like a happy ending and got that, I hope that Rosie & Robbie gets theirs as well which would mean a further chapter or book which I will definitely look out for, as that will make the final ending for me.

This was a nice and easy enjoyable read. It is clearly descriptive in parts and there was a nice feel good factor at the end, although it does leave a few loose ends so you can use your imagination in how a couple of the characters end up. Do they find their mates or the children that were taken? A fairly good alpha novel that shows good triumphs over evil despite it taking a while to get there at times.

I really enjoyed this novel because it kept you to stay reading it instead of doing my housework. You could almost visualise the characters and it gave us food for thought. You suddenly realised when reading it that all people are not what you think they are and showed us good examples of good and evil also how all powerful men are not the same, how some are very considerate and understanding of their people. Then it shows life can start badly but end up with a very happy ending.

What a great book love the twists and turns it would be great to have another book to follow on from this to complete the Robbie and Tony situations and the conclusions on finishing the cult there seems to be alot of room to carry the story on in several directions and I'm hoping the author with delight us all with their great imagination and obvious love of writing maybe a look at the doctor to I have a feeling her story could be a great one xx

This story kept me interested the entire time. I really enjoyed it and was sad that it was over. Maybe a sequel? I can only hope. I've come across some novels in this genre that seem to duplicate other storylines. Not this one. It was refreshing to read. I'll probably add it to the short list of novels that I'll reread. Great job by the author in writing a great story. Two thumbs up.