He Chose First Love, I Chose the Alpha King Reviews

It has promise, I just wish the story could stay straight and move on from the 'she's stronger than he thinks' and 'I'll show him'. We need to move on from the beginning and get into substance or many, myself included, will stop reading since it won't move on. This minimum word thing for a review is dumb. I can't say the same thing over and over and over again. The author has some really good ideas for plots though, just keep it straight.

I am really liking this book so far but I get confused sometimes. Like are they true mates, does only he feel it, why is he so hot & cold & they've had sex already a couple of times but when they get close they (especially her) act like they've never been intimate together before. Then there is her job & alpha mother. How does nobody at the company not know who she is yet they know the adopted daughter?! Didn't she grow up in the pack?! I don't know if its partially written by AI but the story line has gaps & flops around not to mention talks about things like an accident that was not previously mentioned. Like I said good plot & overall story line but a bit confusing & disappointing too.

Hopeful that more chapters are in the works. Conrad and our girl need closure, to work on both of their tendencies to avoid conflict through fibs or being away from each other. I think Alpha Mom and the best friend’s sister both need a large reality check! Logic is always impressive but sometimes common sense needs to be co soldered as well, the level of just delusion is a bit much, like an over done daytime TV Soap Opera. Not everything has to be a champagne splashed quarrel at a billion dollar party.

A delicious slow-burn wrapped in claws, crown, and stubborn hearts. The story follows a powerful female alpha who finally walks away from a relationship where she spent three long years trying to earn love that should have come freely. Her strength really shines in that moment. Fate then throws her straight into the path of the werewolf king, her true mate. Their dynamic is electric but beautifully complicated. She refuses to admit her feelings, determined not to lose herself again, while she is convinced what he feels cannot possibly be love. The tension between pride, healing, and destiny makes every interaction crackle. Watching two strong leaders circle each other emotionally while clearly meant to be together is both satisfying and addictive. A perfect mix of heartbreak, growth, and undeniable mate-bond chemistry.

I found this to be intriguing and fun, love the political intrigue setting of the business world. Although i did notice a litany of spelling mistakes and the timeline of the chapters seem to jump around a lot. I noticed towards the end Sylvia tells Helena that Caeser asked her to be his mate but that was established early on so its a bit confusing. Ultimately though I found it to be a fun read and with some proofreading and a little clean up could go from a good story to a fantastic story.

I liked the story but wish there was more to it, like what happens with Helena, and does the wolf king inform her he is the boss of vertex, how does she react when she finds out? Does she finally expose Selene for the fake she is, and how does her mother react when she learns Selene's true nater? Does she finally accept her position as the wolf King's mate, or does she reject it once she finds out he has been lying to her?

This is one of the most 'I can't wait to finish a story' and an entertaining one. The storyline authors made is great, making readers want to read more and more. A lot of the other stories have been on pause or not getting as much attention due to to me not being able to put this one down. This is exciting I’m almost finished reading as well. I'm keeping up the story and hope it will be a happy ending.

It’s interesting so far but the lead up to Ceasar’s identity is taking too. Someone should know and have recognized him by now. Otherwise it is an entertaining read so far. This is one of the first books that shows a lot of character personality. I hope there will be a little more background on some of the supporting characters. Showing some of Sylvia‘s personality before she went after Zane is interesting for the story. Looking forward to reading more.

I like the story line how sylvia meets ceaser and how they click, the way he takes care of her and how considerate. I enjoy the fact that zane doesn’t know the real identity of sylvia except that she’s an omega and because of that continues to look down on her. Is Sylvia really the biological daughter of Alpha frost, why the preference of the adopted daughter over the biological daughter. Am enjoying the book so far and can’t wait for

I’m loving to storyline between the lead female and lead male characters. I like their strong personalities that both complement and match each other. I would like for Caesar to reveal who he is soon but at the same time it plays a mystery and also shows true genuine love if Sylvia likes him without knowing him being the alpha king. The way he comes and protects Sylvia is very admirable and Sylvia needs that person in her life because even though she is an alpha herself she still look down upon and treated like an omega by the people and her mother and sister. I like to see how the end will unfold for both alphas.