My Alpha Stepbrother's Dirty Secret Reviews

Still need to finish reading the book... As I'm definitely having mixed feelings about the story development. It's intense and at the same time frustrating. Killian is irritating me to the max... And as for Liana I still need to see more. I like this book but I need to finish this book to have proper view... I want Killian to be more open to Liana's father and to be bravetoh claim his family... Pondering on election by putting family into consideration pendulum...

I loved this story! It was easy to follow and I loved the characters. I want more adventures with Liana regarding her Wolfe abilities... those could be great story lines as well. Killian turned out to be a good person, wasn't to sure there for awhile. Liked the way you opened the door for Ryan and Anna, can't wait to read that book!Well done! The whole book transitioned smoothly from one adventure to the next. Loved it, thanks for sharing!

Pretty good plot line, very detailed. Some of the chapters repeat too much of the previous chapter. The way one chapter ends is the way the next begins and it gets redundant. Other than that, we'll written and haven't found any details where the author forgets their own story and things don't add up. Everything is running along as it should and tying well together; characters, plot lines, time lines...so far so good. Waiting for main character to find out the biggest secret and feel like it should have out by now.

It’s a great story line. I’m definitely invested. Great characters, steamy scenes and plenty of drama. I have a love/hate feeling for them and I find myself yelling when they’re making a mistake or worse. However, the writer needs to go back and do some editing. Several chapters (which I paid for) were repeated in the following chapters, it made a 10 page chapter 5. I feel a little duped by that but I’m already committed.

Why is this a book that you have to read chapters twice. One chapter had 16 pages and the first six were a copy and paste from the previous chapter. 10 out of 10 for consistency on that! It's a shame everyone hates it! I don't understand also why you censor words for the first 20+ chapters then suddenly it's okay for you to say everything you previously censored. The narrative is okay but the possessiveness is a bit too extreme.

It’s a good read although there are some strange aspects to it, like the father’s possessive nature with his daughter. He doesn’t like Killian for wanting to control her but he does the same thing 🤷‍♀️ It keeps you in suspense that’s for sure, I’m only up to chapter 40 so there is obviously a lot more twists and turns. I love the sexy heated connection with Liana & Killian it’s pretty hot stuff 😊

Really interesting with new twists and turns in every chapter. The characters are complex and so is the story so far. I'm intrigued to see where things go and how the many many conflicts and questions are resolved. The story also offers an interesting new take on familiar werewolf stories. It's so fascinating to consider how political calculations have to be made instead of going with the preferred choice. I find myself reading every chapter with bated breath, wondering what's next. A great read overall!

Liking it so far, but not loving it. So much repetition, feels like the story is progressing really slowly. I skip over a lot of dialogue because I just want to hurry up and get to the point. Don’t love the amount of rereading when starting a new chapter and don’t love the amount of spacing between paragraphs, looks more like a script rather than a book. I really like the over all story line tho, just a few deterrents but that could also just come down to my personal preferences and just be a me problem rather than an actual issue with the story.

Fantastic book!! Well done! The storyline as well as the characters were described so perfectly! I cannot wait until the next book comes out. The author does an incredible job of describing the emotions and each person's personal account of theirs. I can't help but wonder if there will be a 3rd book to come out or whether it has been spoken of as of yet. Thank you! This may actually be my favorite book that I have read on any mobile app before!!

In all an interesting story line but frustrating that a lot of new chapters repeat the last page of the previous. Typical alpha male taking for granted that the FMC will just drop everything to be his when he’s not willing to do the same. Trigger warning for SA and manipulative behaviors. FMC character has not yet found her voice to speak up for what she wants and is cowing to her father’s demands and letting him continue to control her.