The Alpha's Rejected Mate Reviews

The ending was extremely rushed. What happened after they left Logan’s territory and got back home? So many unknowns that need answered. Is there a second book out? Does Monica ever have a good relationship with her father? Do Monica and Asher have more kids together? Do Logan and Jessica stay together or does regret letting Monica leave with Asher? The book was good, but it definitely left a lot of things unanswered. How do the kids feel once they get back to Asher’s kingdom?

It was very interesting and kept me wondering what would be next. I wonder who will end up with Monica. I was wondering who had tied her up. The whole story of what happened is still unresolved. How did Monica end up blind folded and in the room, who did that? And what is up with her father hating her so much. So I really enjoyed the story, but have these questions. The story kept me interested and wondering what would be next.

I didn’t like the way it ended and it was so confusing twin sisters who both had the same mates but Monica get rejected raped and disregarded whateva happen to the two million dollars he left for her after he raped her and why was she starving if he left he the money it didn’t make sense he should of been punished and jailed for raping her u should of let their bond go but instead u made her a white wolf with powers that she really didn’t know how to control u should of left her wordless and weak

Okay, I will not lie to y'all, this story was a plot twister puzzle 😉 that "quirkily" fits itself together st the very end. AND the parents, who da thunk, right?!! I myself read, fell asleep, read again, napped, ate and read, ate, slept 😴 and finished this one in 42 hours. Watch out this one has more typos, age changes, and name switches than any others I have read thus far! If those things bother, prepare yourself and read it anyway...Life's messy, keep moving, it b gets better!!

The storyline was okay, but the editing leaves something to be desired. Tons of misspelled words, names.. even completely incorrect names inserted into the story. The editing is incredibly sloppy. Repeating lines or paragraphs makes the already tiny chapters feel redundant and slows the storyline down. 8 "pages" is a ridiculous chapter size, especially considering so many ads are required to unlock the next tiny chapter. Pov is a tad confusing at times. A chapter will be from one characters point of view, but it's not really. That makes the story more difficult to follow.

Brilliant book gripped from the start I absolutely loved it well written and a great cast of characters and story line loved it will read more from this author It's a good development short read very in detail. I appreciate the supporting characters too. book easy to read and appreciate its low drama throughout the story. Five stars as always for imagination. It is nice to read a shifter book that varies from witches and rogue plot lines. So far all this books I've read have been very creative and variations from the norm. A very good thing

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This is an awesome read. The characters are alive, and the situations are real life like. There are many ways first this story to continue and grow. It would be great to have the parent's stories. Then the children's after they grow up. Even the story of Tristian and the rogues would be an interesting spin off. If there are more to this I will definitely read all of them also. Just to get the full back stories and the full future adventures.

I really like the story, but it ended TERRIBLY!! It ended on a cliffhanger!! Is there another book? What happened with them once they separated!! Did they live happily, was Minicas father different when she came home? Did he know he had twin daughters? And what about Bonnie? Does she know the story about Monica and Jessica? There is so much left unsettled. I'm really unhappy with the way this story just abruptly ended. There's no explanation or anything! 🤔

This has a very good story line. I just wish that the author would keep the pack names right. First it was Iron Claw and now it's become the Nightfall pack. And even if Monica were to even consider giving Asher a chance why would she ever forgive him for raping her? And Logan has been nothing but good for her and to her as well as her children. He took in a broken penniless and pregnant she wolf and loves her completely