The Rejected Luna’s Rise Reviews

The writing is mostly good, a few minor mishaps here and there, mostly word choice and/or spelling, andsome small inconsistencies, but overall I like it, it's a very gripping story. Easy to follow for the most part too, and I like the characters, love how even though the female lead is being disrespected by her mate, everyone else so far is on her side, makes a nice change from similar stories where absolutely everyone spits on the lead. Definitely worth the read.

Oh I can’t wait to hear how Ariana can reject Damian! Gosh that jerk needs to just be honest! He’s the alpha for goodness sake and he can’t even explain things to his Luna!? Too busy letting lily get into his head. Idiot! Lily knows what she’s doing, she’s acting slick to get Damian to give in and he’s falling right into her trap. Riley is the best!!! She is a rider for sure!

It’s kind of a calm novel, it has an updown part that make us wondering but in a soft way. As a reader we were brought trough the flow of the story. I like how the writer manage each of the figure, they seems to be real, we can feel their emotions, their anger, their hope. I have read a lot of novels, and I can say it is a well-written novel. Readers will be attracted to finish it.

Obsessed! The storylines and characters had me completely captivated—I never wanted it to end. I was so engrossed and constantly craving more drama and passion. I couldn’t put it down; every spare minute I had was spent reading, thinking about the twists, and wanting to dive back in. The emotions, intensity, and connections felt so real. I’m still not over it and already wish I could experience it again for the first time! Absolutely unforgettable and worth every single moment.#characters #drama #passion

This is clearly written by an AI and it is not very well done. There are a lot of grammar mistakes, pointless chapters, and repetition. It reads as if it is the authors second language. The chapters are extremely short and over priced. One chapter is not much more than an author’s note about edits. It started out ok but it seems like even the author added it to their “do not finish” list. I’ll likely do the same.

The Luna's crying constantly was getting on my nerves. I found myself so engaged in the store, that I was yelling in my mind for her to grow a backbone and toughen up. But she was protecting her family from the Alpha anger. She is finding out a way she can reject him and live. Alot of twists, but I feel soon Lily is going to play her cards, then Alpha will see what kind of a witch she really is. I can't stop reading

That wasn't the finality I was expecting. I wanted the half breads captured. I wanted for Alpha to apologize to Luna and make it all up to her. I was also looking forward to the Alpha apologizing to his parents and grandfather. He needs to give the Luna everything not ever hold back give her a tongue bath and as he kisses and picks each limb he needs to ask her for forgiveness. Til she decides to forgive him and give him their child an heir to carry out the Alpha legacy with the help of his mother not the father because his mind is full of uncooked rice

I think I have a love - hate type of feelings for this novel. It’s honestly really good but it’s also heart wrenching and really gets you angry for the FMC. Like why can’t he just be honest with her from the start, and why is Lily so important to him? Does he not hear himself when he talks? All he talks/thinks about is that dumb hoe, then he wonders why she’s mad? Like are you for real rn?!

Great story to read to pass the time. I like the MFC is not backing down from knowing her worth just because of the mate bond. I can there is some writing lost in translation but it’s easy to figure out what was supposed to be written. I do hope the MFC begins to get smarter about investigating her husband. I loved that her parents and mother in law didn’t turn their backs on her. If they had I may have stopped reading. Interested to see how this turns out and what the old man can do to help her!

The story goes on a circle, in a loop the Luna wanting to reject the Alpha. The Alpha wants to hold onto her even with having his ex girlfriend and her child back in his pack. The difficulty is she can’t leave and now she is stuck with a crazy Alpha who wants to keep the cable and eat it too. He cares for Lily but her I refusing to let go of his mate. The Alpha needs help.